Attendance to Your Needs
You've finally showed.I expect to be paid in cash. Now.Only then can you carry meon your hands and knobby kneesto my keep, where a naughty manlike yourself can be purgedof dark wants and desires....
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Jim-I think some of the individual lines in the first half are missing much of your usual heft and energy, and especially the imagistic vigor--I associate with your work. The poem picks up quite a bit...
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Jim ---Sooo, you answered that magazine ad too!I said to the lady, "don't stop now....I'll write a check."I can remember when this was found only in the small print ads of the Los Angeles Free Press...
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The spanking got my attention. This is a little different for me from you yet, it is still executed well.
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Thanks, Ryan, bernie, and Christine, you naughty poets, for the comments and suggestions. Eroticism covers a broad spectrum of activities, and some predilections have a basis in our upbringing....
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you know i'm no scholar, but i can read, and i know what i like.i loved the second stanza of this-- read it several times. (the first ain't bad either, but maybe not as well-done as its sister)....
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Ginger, just a little S&M. Different strokes for different......Jim
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